Break of Day in the Trenches

University Of Oxford First World War Poetry Digital Archive
Second Typescript made by Annie Rosenberg, possibly in June, and worked into later by Isaac with line 8 cancelled in pencil, and lines 20-2 cancelled and replaced with the 5 lines used in the copy-text. Below the poem Isaac Rosenberg has written 'A. R.' in pencil, and Annie Rosenberg has written 'Isaac Rosenberg. / June 1916.' On the reverse 'C' and 'From S. Schiff' are written in pencil, not in Isaac Rosenberg's hand.