Second Typescript made by Annie Rosenberg, possibly in June, and worked into later by Isaac with line 8 cancelled in pencil, and lines 20-2 cancelled and replaced with the 5 lines used in the copy-text. Below the poem Isaac Rosenberg has written 'A. R.' in pencil, and Annie Rosenberg has written 'Isaac Rosenberg. / June 1916.' On the reverse 'C' and 'From S. Schiff' are written in pencil, not in Isaac Rosenberg's hand.